写作思路：不要平铺直叙地进行，要注意及时地、不断地变化描写的角度，使描写更加具体，给读者主体化之感。做到条理清楚、自然、明白，不杂乱，要倾注自己的思想感情。
My Home Town
My home town is a beautiful place. It stands beside a wide river and is rich in fish and rice.
But in the old days it was a poor and backward little town. Many people had no work. They lived a hard life.
In 1949 my hometown was liberated. Since then great changes have taken place there. The streets have been widened. Factories, schools, hospitals, cinemas and theatres have sprung up one after another. The life of the people is greatly improved.
I love my hometown. All the more I love its people. They are working hard so as to make it still richer and more beautiful.
我的家乡很美丽，但是在很久以前那里很贫穷，很多人找不到工作，过着艰辛的生活，在1949我家乡解放了。那里发生了很大的改变，有了学校，医院....我喜欢我家乡，爱我说有家乡的人，他们的努力工作是家乡变得更美。
扩展资料
想写好作文，必须具备扎实的基本功，作文的基本功主要体现在词、句、段三个方面。
单词方面，积累单词，扩大词汇量，弄清词的确切用法及相似词的用法区别，以及很多固定短语、习语的用法，要准确地表达想要表达的意思。
句子方面，注意一些常用的句式，平时看到比较好用的句式要记下来，多模仿，还要在写文章时注意长短句的结合。
段落方面，注意整篇文章的整体布局，要从整体上把握每段的中心思想，避免偏题、走题。
提高写作水平不是一朝一夕所能完成的，最重要的是养成好的学习习惯，平时注意多积累，勤动笔、多思考，潜移默化中写作水平便会不断提高。
写作思路：要直接简化任务语言。在叙述中，我们要把直接叙述变成间接叙述，尽可能简化人物语言。这样，即使情节连贯，又使语句“简练”。
Hello,everyone!My name is Yang Ao.Let me introduce my hometown.My hometown is Lingbao,Henan Province.I have lived here for twelve years.It is very beautiful and it has long history.There are many tourism buildings and delicious food.
The city is small,but the people are friendly.If you come here,you will be served by Lingbao people.Many visitors like to visit here and there are many good places to visit. I love my home town，I love everything about it.I hope you will visit here soon.
大家好！我是杨奥，让我介绍我的家乡。
我的家乡是河南省灵宝市，我住在这儿已经12年了，它很漂亮，并且有悠久的历史。这里有许多旅游建筑和美味的食物。
虽然这个城市很小，但是这里的人民很友好。如果你来这里，你会受到灵宝人热情的接待。许多游客喜欢参观这里，这里也有很多好地方适合参观。
我爱我的家乡，我喜欢这里的一切。我希望你们能来参观我的家乡。
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My hometown specialty pear, in spring, white pear ushered in a number of tourists, tourists watching pear at the same time, can also claim the pear, the fall can claim to own the pear picking pears. Pear features of our hometown is the skin thin flesh is thick taste sweet, Paul you eat also want to eat, friends come to my hometown the taste of pear!
追问大概意思是什么，我英语很差
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这个我也不太清楚
你就凑合着用吧
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