第1个回答 2020-09-19
我觉得能得个23分左右，因为题目的要求也都写上了。
第2个回答 2020-09-21
另外一个一模一样的也是你问的吧
I came to a fruit farm with my classmates last weekend.The farm is about 10 kilometers far from our school.There were so many kinds of fruit trees.
We were so happy to see this scene，and started to pick fruit.I like apples most，so I picked a lot of apples.About two hours later，we all got enough fruit .We palyed some games after lunch ，and got back to school.
It was so happy to spend that weekend with my classmates，and I am waiting for the next time.
I came to a fruit farm with my classmates last weekend.The farm is about 10 kilometers far from our school.There were so many kinds of fruit trees.
We were so happy to see this scene，and started to pick fruit.I like apples most，so I picked a lot of apples.About two hours later，we all got enough fruit .We palyed some games after lunch ，and got back to school.
It was so happy to spend that weekend with my classmates，and I am waiting for the next time.
第3个回答 2020-09-19
看不懂吖，想给点意见都没办法，但是感觉挺牛逼的样子，给个24.9分
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