请问我这篇英语高考作文可以得多少分,满分是25分

Great Changes I am deeply impressed by the great changes that have taken place in the school over the past three years. After the quake, nearly all of the things of the school was in ruins.But at present,there are a great many of modern equipments in the school . For instance,the government of Si chuan invested a great deal of money to help theschool to build the new gymnasium and the Mutimedia classrooms in 2008. And,some other businessmans in community also spent a lot of money on the modern teaching buildings in 2009 .Now,many teachers and students in the school is stronger and full of more happiness than before. As how I see it, The terrible disaster later, our landsmans always hope that not all hope was lost,and only with our efforts can we defeat all of the difficulties,that is the reason why great changes took place in the school。

点子要分开写,你的第二点和第三点写在一起了, 在写的时候,一定要出现关键词,比如第一点的change 第二点的reason,第三点 i think in my opinion 这样阅卷老师就一目了然,晓得你有没有漏写,按点给分,我们是这样的, 但不晓得你们新课改后会不会有变化 像你这样写,有些老师就可以说你漏泄而扣分,这个是很吓人的,5~6分就没了
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